LILIEN.zart V

First let me say that I really like this image. It has so many wonderful things about it. The 'mood' or the 'feel' of the image is just fantastic. The wardrobe is very eye catching and the colors of the corset completely match the surroundings. The 'hat' is whimsical and fun and adds the dash of color to the image that makes it pop. The model is attractive in a semi- non-conventional way (not typical blonde bimbo bombshell) which makes the image very appealing.

There are however, a couple of negatives that I should mention (this being a serious critique and all <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> )

1. Cropping the fingers on each hand is a bit disturbing. Even though the crop is uniform.

2. The model is directly in the middle of the image... while rules are made to be broken, I think in this case the rule of thirds might apply. Vertically speaking... her eyes are on the top third line, and her chest is on the bottom third line. As the viewer my eyes keep darting back and forth. I think moving the subject off center would remedy this.

3. I love the green curtain in the back, but the dark flowered-patterned wall peeking out is distracting.

4. I feel like the camera was just a bit too low of an angle in this shot. I feel like I'm looking up just a bit too much. I'd love to see this same shot with the camera above the eye level of the model.

Again, it's a GREAT image! My nitpicks are just something to think about for future shots. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> Thanks for sharing your work with us. -Goots