my only pause is the large area of negative space. bring out the detail, however subtle & the model won't look like she is cut in half. test this image by standing back 15 feet, then walking towards it. your light source fell short. hopefully you will be able to pull detail out.
so be it ( sounds like a defensive posture to me), but it is not a shade. a shade is a value with detail or D min. anything void of detail is negative space. that is my point. I've seen your work & I like your style. This image is the only one(out of your entire gallery) that falls short.
i love everything except that it doesnt seem that the apples and the girl have the same light source so it makes the apples look very much like they are collaged on top but otherwise i absolutely love the dark erie feeling to this photo