rosen.rot II

What a stunning work! The bold, strong shapes of the models and textures created from the lighting you used and the clothing draw the eye in immediately.

For critique, I'd offer a few (very!) small things. The wallpaper pattern is busy enough I feel it distracts from the models a little, especially the one in the middle. The lampshade also seems a little out of place, sort of floating off to the right rather than a strong part of the composition. Finally, a little more space at the top might help the model on the left from feeling crowded up against the picture edge.

These are all really tiny things, and overall I think you did an excellent job. Gorgeous!